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STALKER by ilovem

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I never really knew you…

Yet you were obsessed with me.

I don’t understand why,

‘Cuz I haven’t got much beauty.

You’re the worst guy I’ve met,

Looks are all you search for.

I want guys who want personality,

Could I ask for any more?

I saw you as a jerk

The day you asked me out.

I thought you’d expect a “no”,

But then I saw you pout.

I don’t feel sorry for you,

You deserve what you get.

You ask me all of a sudden,

And we haven’t even met.

So then you start to stalk me,

It really made me worry.

I always saw you stare at me,

So I ran home in a hurry.

I’m so relieved you moved,

I can live my life free.

I don’t see anyone gaze,

Not a person following me.

You’ll never be my friend,

You’ll never be my guy.

We’ll never be together…

Not even the day I die.
Here's more of my bad poetry ^^;
I did this in a hurry so it's not so good I don't think.

Yep it's about my stupid stalker from last year.
Real experiences. Bleh.

Ok this is the part where you leave comments ^^ (if you want)
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:icondeathlee28:
DeathLee28 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
@JinKazamasLady i have the same problem, except it's in my dreams
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JinKazamasLady Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
Stalker sucks ass xD I have one . She really loves me so much that she cannot live without me :lol: i think i sucks ass ! Ppl with much boring time suck and dont know what to do ! So they stalk and make their life become a lil exciting :lol: I never stalk her and would never do . my friends tell me always thats its already obvious thats he do ... i think its poor and she need a life ... ._. ... but one site its amuse me to hear it xD seems she realy loves me *LMAO* ...

Nice poem :) In the way of love i can understand it very well .
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JinKazamasLady Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
i love my typos xD ... sorry ^^; .
I mean that she already do . and that she fu**** sucks ass ! xD ... well i suck sometimes to i admire :P
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DeathLee28 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Fuckin creepy as hell but its good. And im sorry that happen to you. Hope you are okay now (not trying to freak you out just want to know if ur ok). Trust me i had stalkers but for some reason when it came to fear why don't i feel scared? fucking weird.
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lythium-flash Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009  Student General Artist
:/ this exactly describes my situation right now
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Nami-Hyoko Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008
nice
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RiniUsagiToSLove Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2008   Writer
Vey nice work, I know how you feel. I've been stalked twice and it took a lot of courage to tell them I din't like them.
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DominotheFembot Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008
I've had a stalker too, so I know how you feel hon. The thing we have in common is......that guy moved away too. Weird huh?
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proudcloud Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2008
Wow, that really made me shiver...

:+fav:
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Kay-Elle-Bell Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
This is a really great poem^^

It's kind of freaky though because it reminds me of just 2 days ago a there was a stalker on dA.
He terrorized a deviant and I so happened to join at the wrong time, and have a similar username as the person getting stalked. and others thought I was the stalker in disguise ;-;

I(t was a pretty scary experience.
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Magato Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
wow!
but really sad XD
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:iconsykeria:
Sykeria Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
geeezzzz....that's frickin scary :/
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mikski91 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2008
it's not bad,i thought it was really good,i can actually relate to it, thanks for posting
it
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hollynew Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
thats pretty deep
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:iconrinoa36:
rinoa36 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
Thanks ! ^ ^
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abcdefg21 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2008
Awsumness!
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:iconrinoa36:
rinoa36 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2008
:D Thank you !
I really love your avatar, by the way. :nod:
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abcdefg21 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008
Thnx! I Like It 2.

Welkumz
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ariokage Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2008
great poem i love the story to it
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rinoa36 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2008
Thank you !
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:iconariokage:
ariokage Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2008
ur welcome
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:iconstreasheck-core:
StReAsHeCk-CoRe Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2007
I love stalkers.
They make my day.
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rinoa36 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2007
:laughing:
Really? Wow..
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juggaloryda4life Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2007
i love this pome i can relate to what your talking about :/
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llouvakates Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007
I so0o0o agree with this..
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:iconrinoa36:
rinoa36 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
XD
Thank you for the comment + :+fav:! :heart:
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:iconllouvakates:
llouvakates Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
:Dyour welc..:D
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purple-ninjas Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2007
U r way not bad at poetry!! I wish i could write one like u!!

Also, i've had a stalker before too, and it didn't turn out good..... so yeah, but Awesome Poem!!! *faves
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rinoa36 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2007
XD Well, I'm not really a poetry type of person, I just write when I feel like it :D and I take words that rhyme and...put them together ^^;

Thanks for the fav!!!
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purple-ninjas Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2007
your welcome!! <3
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plarie Featured By Owner May 16, 2007
Wow. XD That's not bad poetry. I don't even know how to write poetry.

*cannot write poetry to save life*



Stalker, huh... o.O Scary~!
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:iconrinoa36:
rinoa36 Featured By Owner May 16, 2007
Thanks for the comment!!!
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:iconplarie:
plarie Featured By Owner May 19, 2007
You deserve it! It's really kewl.
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LunaStarQ Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2007
Stalker!!!
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:iconrinoa36:
rinoa36 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2007
lol :D
thanks for the comment + fav!
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Never-Change-4me Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2007
A stalker? Gee Wilikers
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:iconrinoa36:
rinoa36 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2007
Thnx 4 the comment!
LOL!
Yes..
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Never-Change-4me Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2007
You're welcome.
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TotalGeekling Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2007
:O_o: BAD poetry????? HECK NO!!! Wonderful! And it tells so much about your stalker...good thing he moved away! He was in my history class last year. whew.
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rinoa36 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2007
Thank you Kix!!! :hug:
History class? Oh that's right, you were in the same class as Laura Porter!
Once, my stalker and I were in the same room during nutrition...the atmosphere had sorta...changed, and I felt REALLY weird...so I left lol
Stupid stalker...
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TotalGeekling Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2007
You're welcome!
That must've been creepy OwO
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silverchain012 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2007
wow I'm glad I don't have a stalker! :O_o:
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:iconrinoa36:
rinoa36 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2007
LOL
Thanks for the comment!
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silverchain012 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2007
you're very welcome!!! :D
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forgottenxxlove Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2007
Wow.
good poem
but creepy.
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rinoa36 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2007
thanx 4 the comment!
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forgottenxxlove Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2007
no prob
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Smiles1234 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
that was awesome!!!!!! u r a wonderful rhymer!! that was a wonderfully well written poem :clap: !! :D you deserve an award!!!! WOOO! lol
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rinoa36 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
thanks bunches!
:hug:
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